Working Parents: Impact
Task: Write a discursive essay exploring the impact of having both parents work full-time.
Requirements:
- Discuss both the positive impacts (benefits) and the negative impacts (challenges) on family life.
- Consider different perspectives, such as those of the parents and the children.
- Present a balanced, well-reasoned exploration of both sides before reaching a clear conclusion.
- Aim for a formal, objective tone throughout your writing.
💡 Writing Tips
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Think about the good things (benefits) and the tricky things (challenges) of both parents working.
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Imagine you are a parent and then imagine you are a child – how might each feel?
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Use examples from everyday life or what you might have heard.
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Organise your writing: start with an introduction, discuss both sides, and finish with a conclusion.
📝 Sample Answer
When both parents work full-time, it can change family life in many ways, both good and sometimes a bit tricky.
One of the best things is that families often have more money. This can mean they can afford nicer holidays, new clothes, or even just extra treats. Parents might feel proud that they are working hard to provide for their family, and children might learn how important it is to work. My mum says she likes her job and it makes her happy.
However, there can also be challenges. Sometimes, parents come home very tired after a long day, which might mean less energy for playing games or helping with homework. Children might miss having their parents around more, especially after school. Families often need to find good childcare, like after-school clubs or help from grandparents, which can be difficult to organise.
So, while having two working parents can bring many advantages like financial security and good role models, it also means families need to be good at planning and finding ways to spend quality time together, even when everyone is busy.
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