Writing task
SECTION B: EXTENDED WRITING
You should spend 30 minutes on this section. You are reminded of the importance of clear and accurate written English and of careful presentation in your answer. All questions carry equal marks.
Question 2: Having a pet is wonderful but you have to be a responsible owner. Use the view above to write a magazine article in which you inform and persuade the reader of the benefits of owning a pet.
[25 marks]
Practise this exact question with personalised feedback on your writing.
Understand the task
Why Owning a Pet Can Be Wonderful is a persuasive article task that tests article conventions, persuasive detail, structure. Balance companionship and enjoyment with responsibility; do not simply copy a pet-care checklist.
- article conventions
- persuasive detail
- structure
- accuracy
Requirements to keep in mind
Recommended writing time: approximately 30 minutes (as indicated in the paper/section); Writing marks: 25 (subject to separately awarded SPaG marks); Published task/option: 2 (where the source offers alternatives, pupils answer the paper's specified number, not all)
Plan your response
- Balance companionship and enjoyment with responsibility; do not simply copy a pet-care checklist.
- Plan a clear beginning, development and ending within the time available.
- Use precise vocabulary and vary sentence lengths where appropriate.
- Proofread spelling, punctuation and paragraphing before finishing.
Check your response against the task requirements. Leave time to review sentence clarity, punctuation and spelling.
Short atoply teaching example
Written by atoply, not an official school answer or mark scheme. This short illustration shows selected techniques. It does not set a target length or expected mark for the timed task.
Reveal example and teaching notes
A Friend Who Depends on You
A pet can turn an ordinary afternoon into an adventure. A dog encourages outdoor exercise, while caring for a rabbit or guinea pig can teach patience and attention to detail. Animals may offer companionship, but they also rely on us to provide a suitable home, food, exercise and veterinary care. Before adopting one, families should consider the time and costs involved. The best reward is not simply having an animal nearby. It is learning to recognise its needs and earning its trust over time.
Learn from the example
- The response chooses an angle for its intended readers. Its details serve that purpose instead of trying to cover every part of the topic.
- Use the requested article or leaflet form, with each paragraph offering a useful point for that audience. Headings and direct address should serve the purpose of the piece.