Little Women

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Laurie lay luxuriously swinging to and fro in his hammock one warm September afternoon, wondering what his neighbors were about, but too lazy to go and find out. He was in one of his moods, for the day had been both unprofitable and unsatisfactory, and he was wishing he could live it over again. The hot weather made him indolent, and he had shirked his studies, tried Mr. Brooke’s patience to the utmost, displeased his grandfather by practicing half the afternoon, frightened the maidservants half out of their wits by mischievously hinting that one of his dogs was going mad, and, after high words with the stableman about some fancied neglect of his horse, he had flung himself into his hammock to fume over the stupidity of the world in general, till the peace of the lovely day quieted him in spite of himself. Staring up into the green gloom of the horse-chestnut trees above him, he dreamed dreams of all sorts, and was just imagining himself tossing on the ocean in a voyage round the world, when the sound of voices brought him ashore in a flash. Peeping through the meshes of the hammock, he saw the Marches coming out, as if bound on some expedition.

“What in the world are those girls about now?” thought Laurie, opening his sleepy eyes to take a good look, for there was something rather peculiar in the appearance of his neighbors. Each wore a large, flapping hat, a brown linen pouch slung over one shoulder, and carried a long staff. Meg had a cushion, Jo a book, Beth a basket, and Amy a portfolio. All walked quietly through the garden, out at the little back gate, and began to climb the hill that lay between the house and river.

“Well, that’s cool,” said Laurie to himself, “to have a picnic and never ask me! They can’t be going in the boat, for they haven’t got the key. Perhaps they forgot it. I’ll take it to them, and see what’s going on.”

Though possessed of half a dozen hats, it took him some time to find one, then there was a hunt for the key, which was at last discovered in his pocket, so that the girls were quite out of sight when he leaped the fence and ran after them. Taking the shortest way to the boathouse, he waited for them to appear, but no one came, and he went up the hill to take an observation. A grove of pines covered one part of it, and from the heart of this green spot came a clearer sound than the soft sigh of the pines or the drowsy chirp of the crickets.

“Here’s a landscape!” thought Laurie, peeping through the bushes, and looking wide-awake and good-natured already.

It was a rather pretty little picture, for the sisters sat together in the shady nook, with sun and shadow flickering over them, the aromatic wind lifting their hair and cooling their hot cheeks, and all the little wood people going on with their affairs as if these were no strangers but old friends. Meg sat upon her cushion, sewing daintily with her white hands, and looking as fresh and sweet as a rose in her pink dress among the green. Beth was sorting the cones that lay thick under the hemlock near by, for she made pretty things with them. Amy was sketching a group of ferns, and Jo was knitting as she read aloud. A shadow passed over the boy’s face as he watched them, feeling that he ought to go away because uninvited; yet lingering because home seemed very lonely and this quiet party in the woods most attractive to his restless spirit. He stood so still that a squirrel, busy with its harvesting, ran down a pine close beside him, saw him suddenly and skipped back, scolding so shrilly that Beth looked up, espied the wistful face behind the birches, and beckoned with a reassuring smile.

“May I come in, please? Or shall I be a bother?” he asked, advancing slowly.

Meg lifted her eyebrows, but Jo scowled at her defiantly and said at once, “Of course you may. We should have asked you before, only we thought you wouldn’t care for such a girl’s game as this.”

“I always like your games, but if Meg doesn’t want me, I’ll go away.”

“I’ve no objection, if you do something. It’s against the rules to be idle here,” replied Meg gravely but graciously.

“Much obliged. I’ll do anything if you’ll let me stop a bit, for it’s as dull as the Desert of Sahara down there. Shall I sew, read, cone, draw, or do all at once? Bring on your bears. I’m ready.” And Laurie sat down with a submissive expression delightful to behold.

Your Task:

Analyze Laurie’s dialogue when he says, "Shall I sew, read, cone, draw, or do all at once? Bring on your bears. I’m ready."

In your response, address the following:

  • What does this tell you about his character and the tone he adopts?
  • How does this tone and behavior contrast with his initial mood at the beginning of the passage?

💡 Writing Tips

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    • Examine word choice and phrasing: Is the language formal or informal, literal or exaggerated? What impression do these choices create?
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    • Consider the implied eagerness: The long list of tasks suggests a strong desire. What does this reveal about his willingness to participate?
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    • Interpret figurative language: The phrase "Bring on your bears. I'm ready" is an idiom. What does it mean, and what character trait does it highlight?
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    • Compare past and present mood: Reflect on Laurie's disposition at the very beginning of the passage. How different is his current tone and attitude from that earlier description? Explain the shift.

📝 Sample Answer

Laurie’s dialogue, "Shall I sew, read, cone, draw, or do all at once? Bring on your bears. I’m ready," reveals a vibrant, eager, and playful side of his character. The rapid-fire listing of diverse activities (sewing, reading, coning, drawing) demonstrates an intense, almost exaggerated, enthusiasm to be accepted and to contribute to the 'Busy Bee Society.' It shows he is willing to do whatever is asked, even 'girl's games,' to be part of the group.

The phrase "Bring on your bears. I’m ready" is a colloquial and humorous exclamation. It suggests he is not only ready for any task but is also playful and confident, approaching even mundane activities with a sense of adventure and lightheartedness. His tone is cheerful, accommodating, and slightly theatrical, aiming to please and to make light of his situation.

This immediate enthusiasm and jovial tone present a stark contrast to his initial mood at the beginning of the passage. Earlier, Laurie was described as "indolent," in a bad "mood," feeling "unprofitable and unsatisfactory," and "fuming over the stupidity of the world." He was bored, restless, and slightly ill-tempered. The sudden shift in his dialogue illustrates how quickly his spirits lift when he finds companionship and the prospect of engaging activity, highlighting his yearning for connection and how much the presence of the March sisters can alleviate his melancholy.

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