Favorite Fruit

Primary SchoolModerateFoundational Writing

The Prompt

Get ready to become a fruit champion! We want you to write about your absolute favourite fruit and convince everyone that it's the best in the whole wide world. Imagine you're selling it to someone – what would you say to make them desperate to try it?

Start by picking one special fruit. Now, let's explore it with all your senses:

  • Look: What vibrant colours does it have? Is it shiny, dull, or speckled? What's its unique shape?
  • Touch: How does it feel in your hand? Is it smooth, bumpy, soft, or firm?
  • Smell: Does it have a sweet, tangy, or fresh smell?
  • Taste: This is the most important part! Is it crunchy, juicy, smooth, sour, sweet, or a mix? How does it make your mouth feel?

Use exciting, descriptive words (adjectives!) to paint a picture and make your fruit sound incredibly delicious and irresistible. Don't just say 'it's nice'; tell us why it's nice and how it makes you feel when you eat it. Does it make you feel happy, refreshed, or energetic?

You can write a short paragraph or a few brilliant sentences. When you're finished, read it carefully to check your spelling and punctuation. Let your fruit shine!

πŸ’‘ Writing Tips

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    Think with your senses! What does your fruit look like, feel like, smell like, and taste like?

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    Use 'wow' words (adjectives) to make your fruit sound amazing and delicious.

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    Tell us why it's the very best – what makes it special to you?

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    Read your writing aloud to catch any mistakes and make sure it sounds great!

πŸ“ Sample Answer

My favourite fruit has to be the magnificent mango! It's like holding a sunset in your hand, with its skin a glorious blend of sunny yellow, fiery orange, and rosy red. When you slice into its smooth, firm flesh, a sweet, tropical scent fills the air, instantly transporting you to a warm beach. Each bite is a burst of pure sunshine – incredibly juicy, wonderfully sweet, and so incredibly soft it melts in your mouth. Nothing else tastes quite like it, and eating a mango always makes me feel happy and refreshed, like a little holiday for my taste buds. It’s definitely the king of all fruits!

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