Stranger Danger! - Merchant Taylors’ School 11+
Stranger Danger!
You were approached by a stranger on your way home from school yesterday. Write a letter to your friend in which you explain what happened. Explain the event in detail: where you were approached, what the stranger did, how you felt and what you did.
💡 Writing Tips
- •
- Use a friendly letter opening and closing.
- •
- Explain where the stranger approached you.
- •
- Describe feelings without exaggerating.
- •
- Show sensible steps to reach safety.
📝 Sample Answer
Dear Sam,
You will never believe what happened to me on my way home from school yesterday! I was walking past the little parade of shops near the library when a man I did not recognise came towards me.
He was wearing a dark jacket and carrying a large shopping bag. He said he had lost his dog and asked me to follow him into the car park to help look for it. At first I felt sorry for him, but something did not seem right. The car park was almost empty, and I knew I should not go anywhere with somebody I did not know.
My heart was beating fast, although I tried to sound calm. I told him, “Sorry, I can’t help,” and walked straight into the library, where the librarian was at the desk. I explained what had happened and phoned Mum. She came to collect me and helped me report the incident to the appropriate adults.
I am fine now, but I was frightened at the time. I am glad I trusted my instincts and went somewhere safe rather than following him.
See you at school, Alex
Did You Know?
You can use the atoply app to practise this prompt and get instant feedback to help improve your writing skills. Past paper practice requires Max. AI feedback uses your plan allowance.
Practice This Prompt