Workplace Writing Guide

How to Write Better Work Messages

Write concise chat messages that give colleagues the context they need.

The essential idea

A good work message lets a colleague understand the situation and respond without having to ask several follow-up questions. It can be friendly and brief, but it still needs enough context to be useful.

Before typing, decide what the reader needs to know, what you want them to do, and when it matters. Put those points in a logical order and use separate messages only when the topics are genuinely unrelated.

What makes it effective?

Context first

Name the project, customer, document, or earlier conversation before asking a question.

One clear purpose

Keep the message focused on one decision, request, or update.

Easy to answer

Ask a specific question and offer useful options when appropriate.

Calm tone

Use brief greetings and courteous wording without adding unnecessary formality.

A step-by-step method

    1

    Choose the right channel

    Use chat for quick, non-sensitive exchanges and email or a project tool when a durable record is needed.

    2

    Open with context

    Mention the relevant task or conversation in the first line.

    3

    State the point

    Give the update or request directly instead of building up to it.

    4

    Add essential details

    Include the link, date, owner, constraint, or example the reader needs.

    5

    Make the next step clear

    End with a precise question or action, including a realistic deadline if there is one.

    6

    Reread for tone

    Check that brevity has not made the message sound abrupt or demanding.

Worked workplace example

Situation: A designer needs a colleague to choose between two homepage versions.

Title: Homepage review

Hi Leo — I’ve added the two revised homepage options to the design file: [link].

Option A keeps the current layout, while option B gives the customer stories more space. Could you let me know which option you prefer by 2 p.m. tomorrow?

Once you confirm, I’ll prepare the mobile version.

Why this example works

  • The first line supplies context and the file.
  • The difference between the options is summarised.
  • The question and deadline are specific.
  • The final line explains what the answer will unblock.

Useful phrases

Add context

  • Following our discussion this morning, …
  • A quick update on…
  • Regarding the customer request, …

Ask clearly

  • Could you confirm which option you prefer?
  • Do you have ten minutes to review this today?
  • Would Thursday or Friday work better?

Be considerate

  • When you have a moment, could you…?
  • There’s no rush; Friday is fine.
  • Let me know if you need more context.

Common mistakes to avoid

Improve this wording

Avoid: Hi

Use: Hi Sam — could you send me the April sales figures?

Put the request in the first message instead of waiting for a reply.

Improve this wording

Avoid: Can you look at this?

Use: Could you check the totals in rows 8–12?

A defined task is faster to complete.

Improve this wording

Avoid: I need it ASAP.

Use: Could you send it by 3 p.m. today?

A real deadline is clearer and more respectful.

Before you send

  • The purpose is obvious from the opening.
  • Only useful context and details are included.
  • The tone suits the reader and situation.
  • Names, dates, figures, links, and attachments are correct.
  • The message contains enough context to stand alone.
  • The reader knows exactly how to respond.

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