Workplace Writing Guide
How to Give Feedback Professionally
Make feedback specific, balanced, respectful, and useful.
The essential idea
Professional feedback helps someone understand the effect of a specific piece of work or behaviour and decide what to do next. It is evidence-based, respectful, and focused on improvement.
Choose the right setting. Sensitive feedback usually belongs in a private conversation, with writing used to summarise agreed actions rather than deliver a surprising criticism.
What makes it effective?
Specific
Refer to an observable example rather than a label about the person.
Relevant
Connect the feedback to an agreed goal, standard, or impact.
Balanced
Recognise what works as clearly as what needs to change.
Collaborative
Invite the person's view and agree a realistic next step.
A step-by-step method
Check your purpose
Give feedback to improve an outcome, not to release frustration.
Choose the setting
Use private, timely communication for sensitive or corrective feedback.
Describe the example
State what you observed without exaggeration or assumptions about intent.
Explain the impact
Connect the example to the reader, team, customer, or result.
Suggest a change
Make the desired behaviour concrete and achievable.
Invite and agree
Ask for the person's perspective, then confirm the next step and follow-up.
Worked workplace example
Situation: A manager follows up after discussing a colleague's client presentation.
Hi Ava,
Thank you for the preparation you put into today's presentation. The opening summary was clear, and your examples answered the client's main concern well.
In the final section, three slides contained full paragraphs. The client spent time reading them, which made it harder to follow your explanation.
For Thursday's version, please reduce each slide to one main message and move the supporting detail into the notes. I’m happy to review the revised slides with you at 2 p.m. tomorrow.
Let me know how the presentation felt from your side and whether that review time works.
Why this example works
- Strengths are specific and credible.
- The improvement point describes observable work.
- The impact explains why a change matters.
- The request and offer of support are concrete.
Useful phrases
Recognise strengths
- A particular strength was…
- This worked well because…
- Your explanation of… was especially clear.
Suggest improvement
- One area to strengthen is…
- The next version would be clearer if…
- Could you try…?
Invite discussion
- How did it seem from your perspective?
- What support would help?
- Shall we review this again on Friday?
Common mistakes to avoid
Improve this wording
Avoid: You're careless.
Use: The report contains three figures that do not match the source data.
Describe evidence, not a personal trait.
Improve this wording
Avoid: This is always a problem.
Use: This happened in the last two weekly reports.
Use accurate examples instead of absolutes.
Improve this wording
Avoid: Make it better.
Use: Add a one-sentence recommendation at the beginning.
Give a change the reader can act on.
Before you send
- The purpose is obvious from the opening.
- Only useful context and details are included.
- The tone suits the reader and situation.
- Names, dates, figures, links, and attachments are correct.
- Feedback refers to observable evidence and impact.
- The next step and support are clear.
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