Longer Lunch Breaks Needed - Persuasive Writing Writing Prompt

The Prompt

Imagine this: The bell rings for lunch, and suddenly it's a race against time! Do you ever wish you had more minutes to eat your yummy food, chat with friends, or play a proper game of tag? This is your chance to become a brilliant speaker! Your task is to write a persuasive speech to deliver to your classmates. You need to convince them that we either really need longer lunch breaks OR that our current lunch breaks are just right (or even too long!).

Think carefully about both sides. If we had longer breaks, what would be the amazing benefits for students? More energy? Better friendships? And what about the teachers and staff – how might it help or hinder them? On the flip side, if breaks stayed the same, or got shorter, what would happen?

Your speech should be packed with good reasons and strong arguments. Your goal is to make your classmates nod their heads and say, "Yes, I agree!" or "Hmm, I never thought of it that way!" Get ready to persuade!

💡 Writing Tips

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Start with a catchy sentence to grab everyone's attention!
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Give at least three strong reasons why your idea is good.
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Think about what someone who disagrees might say, and explain why your idea is still better.
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Use powerful words like "definitely," "crucial," or "imagine."
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Finish with a clear sentence that tells everyone what you want them to do or believe.

📝 Sample Answer

Good morning everyone! Look around you. Do you see the half-eaten sandwiches, the hurried games of football, the rush to finish everything before the bell? It's clear, isn't it? Our lunch breaks are just too short! Imagine if we had an extra 15 minutes. We could properly enjoy our food, digest it better, and come back to class feeling refreshed and ready to learn, not still hungry and stressed. Teachers would benefit too, as we'd be calmer and more focused in the afternoon. Plus, we'd have more time for creative play and making new friends. Longer lunch breaks aren't just a wish; they're a necessity for a happier, healthier school day for all of us!

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