Ban Mobile Phones at School?

Primary SchoolAdvancedPersuasive Writing

The Prompt

Mobile phones: they're in our pockets, on our desks, and sometimes, they even sneak into school! But should these devices really be allowed in classrooms or even on the playground? This is your chance to make a real difference!

Your mission is to write a powerful letter or essay to your local council. You need to persuade them that a complete ban on mobile phones in all schools (both primary and secondary) is either:

A necessary step to help everyone learn better and stay safe, OR
An unfair restriction that stops pupils from doing important things.

Think about strong reasons for your side: How do phones affect learning? What about safety and cyberbullying? Or do they help with emergencies, learning projects, or keeping in touch with family? Use clear, convincing arguments to make the council understand your point of view!

💡 Writing Tips

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Start with a strong opening sentence that clearly states your opinion to the council.
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Give at least three clear reasons why you believe phones should (or shouldn't) be banned.
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Use powerful words like 'essential,' 'distracting,' 'crucial,' or 'unfair' to make your arguments stronger.
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Think about what the council would care about: pupil safety, better learning, or fairness for everyone.
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Finish with a strong closing sentence that reminds them of your main point and encourages them to take action.

📝 Sample Answer

Dear Council Members, I am writing to you today as a concerned pupil to strongly urge you to implement a complete ban on mobile phones in all primary and secondary schools. While phones can be useful, their presence in school causes far too many problems that affect our learning and safety. Firstly, phones are a massive distraction. During lessons, the temptation to check messages or play games means pupils aren't fully concentrating on their work. This makes it harder for everyone to understand new things and achieve their best. School is for learning, not for endless screen time. Secondly, there are serious safety concerns. Phones can be used to take pictures or videos of others without permission, which can lead to bullying and upset. They can also be a tool for cyberbullying, making school an unhappy and unsafe place for many. By removing phones, we create a calmer, more focused environment where everyone can learn without these worries. Please consider this vital step for the future of our education and well-being.

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