Favorite Room

Primary SchoolModerateDescriptive Writing

The Prompt

Imagine you're giving a special tour of your house to a friend who has never been there before. Your job is to describe your absolute favourite room in your home so vividly that they can almost see, hear, and feel it!

Think about what makes this room so special to you. Is it the cosy armchair by the window, the bright colours on the walls, or the way the sunlight streams in during the morning?

Use your imagination and your five senses to bring your room to life on the page:

  • See: What colours, shapes, and objects fill the room? Are there sparkling treasures, soft rugs, or busy bookshelves?
  • Hear: Is it usually quiet, or can you hear the gentle tick-tock of a clock, the soft hum of a computer, or the distant sounds of outside?
  • Smell: Does it have a particular scent – maybe fresh laundry, old books, or freshly baked cookies from the kitchen nearby?
  • Touch: What are the textures like? Is the blanket soft and fluffy, the wooden desk smooth, or the carpet warm underfoot?
  • Feel: How does the room make you feel? Happy, calm, playful, safe?

Don't just tell us it's a nice room; show us with your amazing words! Paint a picture with your writing so your reader feels like they are standing right there with you.

💡 Writing Tips

  • Use your five senses! What can you see, hear, smell, touch, or even taste in your room?

  • Choose powerful adjectives (describing words) and adverbs (how things happen) to make your writing sparkle.

  • Describe special objects in the room and why they are important to you.

  • Explain why this room is your absolute favourite place to be.

  • Start with an exciting sentence that makes the reader want to step right into your room!

📝 Sample Answer

My favourite room is my bedroom, a cosy haven filled with sunshine and secrets. As you step inside, your eyes are immediately drawn to the bright blue walls, which remind me of a clear summer sky. A fluffy, sheepskin rug, soft as a cloud, covers the wooden floor near my bed, inviting you to sink your toes into it. On my desk, a colourful collection of LEGO creations stands proudly, some half-finished, waiting for new adventures. The window looks out onto our garden, and in the mornings, the gentle chirping of birds often drifts in. My bed, piled high with a mountain of pillows and a patchwork quilt, is the perfect spot for reading or dreaming. It smells faintly of my favourite lavender spray, which makes me feel calm and ready for a good night's sleep. This room is my own little world, a place where I can relax, create, and simply be myself.

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